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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables provide information about
sales
 of two
fairtrade-labbelled
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fairtrade-labelled
 products, coffee and
bananas
 in 5 European
countries
, in 1999 and 2004.Owing to data,
sales
 are presented in
millions
 of
euros
. It is clearly seen from the data that
between
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among
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 all
european
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European
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countries
,
UK
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the UK
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 and
Switzerland
 are presented
such
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apply
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as the most important buyers of coffee and banana, which
purchase
 significantly
increased
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increasing
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 between 1999 and 2004.   To start with coffee, in 1999 there were slight variations in
sales
 amongst five
countries
. The most noticeable
sales
 were done to
Switzeraland
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Switzerland
valuated
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evaluated
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in
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at
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 3
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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euros
. Regarding
to
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apply
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2004,
sales
 increased slightly in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Whereas
,
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the
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apply
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commerce
were
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was
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 doubled in
Switzerland
, 6
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million
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millions
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million
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of
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apply
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euros
comparing
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compared
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 to 3
millions
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million
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 in 1999 and skyrocketed in
UK
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the UK
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, 18
millions
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million
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euros
 more than in 1999.   In turn to
bananas
, in 1999 there were slight fluctuations in
sales
 between
UK
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the UK
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, Belgium, Sweden and Denmark. Most remarkable was
Switzerland
, the principal buyer of
bananas
, which
purchase
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purchases
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 were
valueted
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evaluated
valued
in
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at
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 15M. In 2004, some
countries
such
 as Sweden and Denmark suffered
little
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a little
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 decrease in
banana’s
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banana
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purchase
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purchases
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.
On the other hand
,
countries
 like
Switzerland
,
UK
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the UK
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 and Belgium
rised
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raised
 their
purchase
 in 32M, 4,5M and 3,4M  of
euros
 respectively. Being
the
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Switzerland
 the most important in
consumption
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the consumption
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 of
bananas
both
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in both
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 years.  
To sum up
, in 1999
Switzerland
 was the major consumer of both products.
However
, in 2004
UK
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the UK
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 was the most important
coffee’s
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coffee
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 client and
Switzerland
 in
Bananas
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, bananas, countries, millions, euros, uk, switzerland, purchase, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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