You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to express my satisfaction

upon

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your

course

. Recently, I attended a Thai traditional culinary program at your school.

Although

the

course

period was short, I have learned a lot from the program. Teaching strategies from the

course

is amazing and really interesting for me throughout the program. Especially, the techniques of making salad and dessert are truly easy to be learned for

such

a fresher student like me. Now I am enjoying showing my cooking skills which learnt from your

course

to my friends, family and relatives. They were speechless upon my outcomes. The most they liked is my dessert which is creamy coconut milk and sticky rice with mango sliced. I really appreciate your

course

and I would like to suggest more programmes for your school

such

as fruit carving, other Asian cuisines. These programmes will complete my career as a chef. Kind regards, Yan

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