To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many nations around the globe, foods are the pivotal thing
that is
truly important not only for developed countries but
also
for developing ones. According to the situations nowadays in each country, the increase of citizens population affected to the serving of
food
.
Furthermore
, there are a lot of arguments from each
people
, even researchers, to utilize
insects
as
food
, even though some
people
argue that the stuff is unhealthy and impactful to the ecological balance.
This
essay will discuss both things (benefits and drawbacks) of
insects
food
supported by the examples from the writer's knowledge or experience. Two common advantages of eating
insects
are high protein content in the
insects
'
food
and
people
's tendency to eat
insects
seeing as a high population of
insects
recently increased especially in the agricultural sector. Some
food
provided in the
food
stall in many countries which are Indonesia, Thailand, and Columbia are consists of
insects
. Thailandneese prefers to eat roaches taken from ricefield rather than reaches from home, for the protein compound of cockroaches is truly high and easy to find. Meanwhile, the highest percentages of using pesticides affected
to
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the population of
insects
in the farming sector, so the utilization of
insects
converted to
food
are a crucial piece of way implemented. In fact, many
people
believe that
insects
are unhealthy, but actually, it depends on the kind of
insects
. Even though cockroaches, bugs, and dragonflies are beneficial to each citizen from each country as explained above, other countries
for instance
the United Kingdom, Japan, and the United States are really unlike the insect's products. They argue that
insects
are unclean to eat and harmful to the ecological balance. In conclusion, it is clear that the consumption of common
food
and specific
food
(insect products) depends on the country and
people
's tendencies. On balanced, I would agree with all of the things and would not force any
people
to do something I like to do (eating
insects
).

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