A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called "The book that influenced me most" Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to join with your magazine as a contributor of your new article named “ The
book
that influenced me most”.
Firstly
, I want to introduce the
book
that I read
last
week named, “ Diyunuwe Ran Doratu” which was written by professor Daya Rohana Athukorala. It is a great
book
that describes lots of positive thinking ideas for personal development. Even though I am working in the health sector, I am not aware of my and my family health before reading the
book
.
Also
, if I get more than enough salary, I couldn’t achieve some saving targets. But, after reading
this
book
, there are lots of guides to complete savings and how to look forward to our family. So, it was a brilliant
book
which was changed my mind the most. ,
Also
I personally know, there are lots of people who look forward to getting some guidance on their personal development and task achievement. So, I highly recommend that
book
for those who are willing to have a bright future. Thank you for your corporation. Yours faithfully Kaushalya
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