You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear
Mr.
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David, I am writing to apologize for the loud noise that you heard from our flat yesterday. Let me describe what happened briefly. Yesterday, our son Dan turned seven years old. Even though we are not used to
celebrate
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his birthday inside our flat, Dan insisted to celebrate his birthday at home. So, he invited his close friends and some of our family members.
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, he and his friends played loud music and they sang loudly. That's why you heard some noise. Because
this
should not be an excuse, I would like to apologize on behalf of the whole
familly
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family
for what had happened yesterday. In order to reassure you, my wife and I agreed that we will never allow
this
to happen inside our flat again,so I promise that we will never disturb your peace again from now on. I hope you will favourably forgive us for
this
inconvenience. Best regards, Jay
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