The use of recreational drogs is on the increase, especially among young people. Describe the reasons for this worrying issue and provide suggestions to minimize it.

The issue of
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of recreational
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always has been
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in our society and today, particularly/especially when the topic is about increasing consumption of
drugs
between young
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generations
generation
around the world. There are two key reasons for
this
worrying trouble, but some suggestions can help to overcome it. The
first
and foremost obstacle
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spread
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of
consumption
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of
drugs
it
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is
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accessibility. Drug dealers have their own system where to distribute narcotics. They analyse the most visited or
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concurred
conquered
locations by young
people
such
as clubs and festivals to sell illegal substances.
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solution to
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situation
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would be to improve the level of security of
such
events by increasing
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number of guards and applying a thorough checking manner of belongings. Once
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cached
catched
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the consumer or the dealer, proceed to extraction of the
drugs
and
then
the delivery to the police.
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, deny
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access to any
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suspicious
people
.
Besides
the accessibility to
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recreational
drugs
, there exists another concerning issue, the addiction and dependency that these create. It is universally known that
people
with problems
such
as
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,
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domestic
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or
selfestime
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self-esteem
tend to consume
drugs
to evade themselves from them.
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lack of support or the difficulty to admit that there exist the problem,
people
tend to hook up more with
drugs
and
consequently
face
the
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the effects of the drug
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drugs
effects
such
as unhappiness,
deseases
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diseases
disease
and so on. So,
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as
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solution
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to these problems, will be to provide more support to
drug addicted
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people
and make them feel open to talk and ask for
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help. To conclude,
reacreational
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recreational
drugs
have a huge impact on young generations because of
the
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use between them.
However
, there are several measures that can be taken to minimize and limit
the
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usage. All in all, implementing stricter security procedures and providing more support to the victims, will be a good start to prevent the spread of
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of
drugs
between young
people
.
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