A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

Dear Tom, Hope everything is well. Glad to hear that you are going on a camping holiday
this
summer to
London
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the London
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scape region. I have
being
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there
last
year and enjoyed
a
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it a
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lot so I hope you
also
be able to get the similar excitement. Since
this
is your
first
time in a summer camp you will gain
lot
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a lot
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of experience in how to do a bonfire and to install a tent to stay the night.
Although
it is exciting, please make sure to take a cap and a tube of sun-cream to protect
from
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yourself from
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the sun.
Last
year I experienced dark patches once I came back.
Also
, please make sure to take a pair of boots, since
the
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mountain climbing is a tedious task. Sometimes you may feel
headache
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a headache
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,
hence
make sure to keep some paracetamol in your hand luggage. I am
also
keen on joining
with
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you
this
year
also
, so please inform me if there is any room
in
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on
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the bus and eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours,
Susitha
Correct your spelling
Susitna
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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