A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most.  In your letter, •describe what this book was about, •explain how this book influenced you, •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear sir, I want to grab your attention
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which I read and affect me positively.
This
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is about the love between brother and sister. The story of
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is very interesting and provide knowledge about how useful or important
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of siblings are? especially
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me a lot. The content of the text is that one girl is highly in need of help and there is nobody to help her
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one boy came even he is not her real brother but he
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her problem and help her as her real sister which
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great impact on minds of readers about humanity. I promise that
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message
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of conveying moral habits in people of society.
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keen readers. Thank you. with regards,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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