Nowadays many job seekers are finding jobs that force them to move for from their family and friends. Is it a positive or a negative trend? What can be done about it?

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children
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.
However
,let me tell you
this
would be a pleasure for me to render my services and experience for a noble cause.
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which sort of Voluntary work would be required.
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I am very passionate about
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, Enjoy their company a lot.
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, when my expertise
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for the development and training of Poor, needy young kids. Well,I would be grateful if you could give me the details of working hours ,Specifically days,AS, I have to manage schedule
accordingly
of official hours.
Lastly
,Since I am already committed
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hundred of students , In
this
regard, I would like you to confirm the timings and days.
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I will be available from 1st of
next
month on 8.AM till 2 PM . Looking forward
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your positive
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. Regards, Zunaira
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