Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human’s life. Discuss both views and give your opinion – Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these days learning from
mistakes
of the past is important to avoid repeating previous
mistakes
during
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decisions
about our life
today
. The question is, is
history
the main source of
information
to understand human's life or we can not
learning
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learn

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from previous
mistakes
in
the
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history
to
take
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make

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better
decisions
today
? In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion. In terms of some views, some
people
believe that
history
can not supply us
a benefit
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benefit information
a piece of benefit information

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information
to make the best
decisions
in
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at

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this
time. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that nowadays the world
globalized
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is globalized

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and face
a different kinds
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different kinds
a different kind

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of
challenges
such
as
climate
change,
Thus
, there are
not
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no

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challenges
in the past
today
. To illustrate,
the
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apply

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climate
is a modern phenomenon
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that require

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require
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requires

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policies and new procedures, and as
the
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apply

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climate
change did not exist in the past,
people
will not be able to
learning
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learn

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from prior
challenges
in
the
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apply

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history
how to mitigate the problem of
climate
change nowadays.
However
, there are
people
believe
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who believe

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that
history
may be actually a helpful source of
information
.
This
is because prior wrong
decisions
in
history
maybe help us to
take
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make

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better
decisions
today
by
avoid
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avoiding

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repeating previous
mistakes
.
In other words
, there was a lot of wrong practices in the past regarding human rights just as, racial discrimination and gender discrimination.
people
in the past used to treat Africans as slaves.
Moreover
, women were not guaranteed equal rights as men.
Therefore
, when
people
come to know
problems
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the problems

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behind these negative practices, they take new procedures to avoid previous wrongs. In conclusion,
although
challenges
that we face
it
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apply

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today
differ from
challenges
in the past. I believe that governments can use
the
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history
as
source
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a source
the source

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information
to avoid repeating the
mistakes
of the past in the future.
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