believe that it is better to own a
. I strongly agree with
essay, I will explain how homeownership gives you greater freedom, joy and security than
One of the reasons for
is that having home ownership gives you more free
to focus on the things you like. Since owning a
to create their own place to live,
no longer need to think about other
, I once read an article about a 26-year-old girl who made a tiny
by herself with her parents' help.
she had already been flattering with her friends for a long
, she decided to build her own
from scratch, because her desire of creating her own place encouraged her to start it.
As a result
, now she has more
to focus on her hobbies rather than working for long hours to pay
or a mortgage which is a perfect lifestyle for everyone.
Another reason for having homeownership is
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
its intensive security. Owning a
protect us from distraction
noises from other neighbours.
, in Japan, there has been a recurring problem in small apartments. Because of the walls of Japanese apartments, which are extremely thin, it is very easy for
to hear what the person living in the
room is talking about.
are often distracted by it and have a quarrel with others, which often end up with the person being kicked out of the apartment.
, if you have your own
, your living place is located a few distances away from other
's houses, so the same kind of problem does not frequently happen.
In conclusion, owning a home is better than
since it allows
to have more
doing their interests and it protects their own personal space.