Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter about the computer course which interests me as I am having a keen interest in
such
sort of courses related to computers,
however
, at the time of university, there was no specific subject I had. For your information, as per the requirements I have completed an elementary course.
Firstly
, I want to share that I am staying alone from the family and dealing with all the financial expenses alone so I have been working an accounting firm which helps me to deal with my monthly expenses
such
as rent, food, and so on. So,
this
job is quite essential for me to deal with all
this
.
Lastly
, my work timings are 9 am to 6 pm, if possible can I take the training of
this
course in
such
particular timings. So, it would be great if I can take the classes between 6:30 pm to 9 pm because that will not hamper my job hours, and in
this
way, I will be a part of
this
. I hope to hear a positive response from your end. Yours Sincerely, Swati Arora
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