You have bought electronic equipment and within two days it started to go wrong. write a letter to shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product and services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem.

Dear Mr Dav. My name is Jay, and I have been enjoying the service of your
for five years. Today,
, I am writing to complain about the smartwatch that I bought from your
two days ago.
, I want to address the poor performance of the
's client service. Let me describe what went wrong with my smartwatch. In the beginning, everything worked fine without any noticeable issue, but after 48 hours I noticed a problem with the battery.
the vendor's manual mentioned that the battery should
for 16 hours at least, mine lasts for only two hours. I have been calling the customer service at your
to help me out, but they never called me back. I would kindly ask you to fully refund me. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Should you require any more information please do not hesitate to ask. Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Jay Smith
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