Although most people are reacher than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from stress is at record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how could stress be reduced.

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new age

life

is different from

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few decades that makes

people

suffer from

stress

. There are various problems for hectic

life

and

this

essay will discuss

few

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a few

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of the factors that

makes

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people

stressful

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stressed

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Now a days

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Nowadays

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people

love to make money rather enjoying their

life

. The living cost has been increased which makes us

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run towards

a stressful jobs

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stressful jobs

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which pays a lot.

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this

world become more competitive so that we forget to pursue our passion for doing something we are interested in.

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result

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it ends up in pressure and

stress

by doing hateful work without any interest

towards

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it. For an instance, one who loves photography works in a corporate to earn his day to day living expenses because MNC will pay him more

comparatively

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to his passion.

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may

stress

him by not doing what he loves. In

this

era, most of us are

apadted

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updated

this

situation which affects the society by pushing them into pressure.

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most of the

people

are not finding the right job that matches their

qualification

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qualifications

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. The main reason for

this

should be the increase in

number

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a number

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of engineering colleges. There are as many colleges now and thousand of engineers are passing out every year but there are

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not

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as many job

vaccancy

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vacancy

which may

stress

the

youngstres

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youngsters

a lot.

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can be controlled by not giving

permissions

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to some of the worthless institutions. So that students may find some other courses which

helps

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them to get a job.

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I conclude

this

essay by saying that whatever we do there may be

stress

like worrying about our future or having some responsibilities that we find overwhelming. So we

ourself

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ourselves

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find some time to know about ourselves like what we need in our

life

to stay happy.

This

is the best possible solution to live a

stress less

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life

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Although most people are reacher than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from stress is at record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how could stress be reduced.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Lots of people are throwing away food, what are the reasons for this and how can food wastage is reduced?

Some people think that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens being any happier . to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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