Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include: 􀈈􀀃 what the problem was 􀈈􀀃 why this problem has upset you 􀈈􀀃 what you want to happen as a result of your letter

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction about the inappropriate treatment which I experienced recently in one of your stores. Please, allow me to elaborate

the

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matter.

Last

week, I visited the main branch of your supermarket in Dwarka, New Delhi. As usual, I

firstly

went

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to the

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grocery section to buy some fresh fruits.

However

, I noticed many fruits were finished and some others are not

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very good quality.

Thus

, I call the store supervisor to notify the situation. Surprisingly, he reacted in

such

a rude manner which was not acceptable at all. To make the situation worst, he ordered the security guard to push me out of the store while I was explaining

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about

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the matter. Due to

this

, I am highly disappointed

firstly

by the poor quality of products and

then

by the improper and impolite behaviour of your staff. I hope you can understand how

much

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terrible

situation

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the situation

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was for me.

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, I expect you to take

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stringent action against those who were involved and conduct more supervision on employing and training your employees. So, they can understand customer satisfaction is the prime task for them to increase the image of the company in the market. Expecting your prompt action, Yours faithfully, Jimmy

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Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 9.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Advantages and disadvantages of studentsworking while studying

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It is often said that government spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife,while there are other problems that are more important.do you agree or disagree?

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