You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similer to each other . You don’t’ fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper . In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town centers is different from most other town centers Offer to give a guided tour of our town to the writer of the article

Dear Sir or Madam , I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the topic in a national newspaper which said that all
town
centres
were almost the same in my country .
However
, I do not agree completely with
this
view in my own opinion.
First
of all , I agreed all our
town
centres
are influenced by Chinese culture . There is no doubt that most of our customs are based on Chinese traditions .
In addition
, I
also
agreed the materials used by most
centres
are stones and wood .
However
, from the architectural point of view , I believe that my city
town
centre is different from others because it has its own unique style and decorations .
Moreover
, my city
town
centre is located near the river and which is quite strange because most
town
centres
are situated away from the river . Here, I would like you to visit my
town
if it is possible and I would help you with a guided tour whenever you come . I believe that my letter give you some clarification and I hope you would visit my city in near future . Best regards , Tom
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