You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news.

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Dear Ravi, I am writing

this

letter to tell you, I started a new job in a mechanical company as a manager, recently. I hope you will be happy to hear

this

news because you know I had a childhood dream to join a mechanical company. Well, I belonged from a mechanical background and my study was

also

in the same field so, I tried for so many years to join any reputated mechanical company. It not only helped me to explore new inventions in

this

field but

also

gave me opportunities to follow my passion. I learned to deal with problems on a higher level and how from conflicts between the employees. I

also

deal with new companies to get new investors. At

last

, I want to tell you I am getting married very soon so, you need to come sure with your family. I am for

forwaiting

Correct your spelling

for waiting

waiting

your reply on my achievement. Best regards,

Xas

Correct your spelling

Xmas

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

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