Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Today work from
home
becomes the new normal and people are enjoying their own benefits. While for others it may feel stressful as there is no new activity in their daily routine.
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discuss both
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perspective and provide a reason to have
such
beliefs. Realistically, doing our work in our comfortable places brings lots of advantages.
First
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we can spend time with our family members as we can work from anywhere. So that we can get a work-life balance.
Secondly
, the
home
food. Many people are staying away from their homes and they really struggle to get quality food. By
this
everyone can save seventy per cent of
thier
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their
salary.
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, one of my friends is working in a Corporate which is located in Bangalore. She needs to take care of her own expenses that
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house rent, food, electricity bills and travelling charges. After the
,
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lockdown she moved back to her
home
town which is a small village and she managed to save her earnings. Even though working at
home
brings positive feelings but it
also
has negative impacts
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our mental and physical health. To elaborate staying at
home
and working may cause isolation and stress. Office workspace is anyways different from
home
. There we can interact with various people and we can
also
able to share our knowledge with each other. For an instance, one who works in an office will learn around smarter folks and will be more effective than one who works from
home
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I conclude by saying that working from
home
is a fantastic short term benefit but the cost of
this
will be very high.
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