You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear neighbours, Hi, I am your neighbour who lives

door to you. I apologize for what happened

last

week and I am truly sorry for the noise caused by my daughter. I insist to write

this

letter as a formal apology. Please let me explain what happened that night.

First

, I admit that it is sometimes difficult for single mothers like me to handle the relationship between myself and my teenage daughter. She had played the video games for nearly 4 hours after dinner, So I had to convince her to go to bed

instead

of continuing to play.

However

, a peaceful argument somehow tends to loud quarrels.

Finally

, we both realized argument is not helpful at all. I apologize to wake you up at late night and I am

also

considering better ways in educating my child. In fact, my daughter actually had a verbal agreement with me that she made a promise to go to bed on time. So it will not happen again as we promised. Yours faithfully, Gina

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