Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Well, personally, I disagree with the idea of taking a gap year between finishing school and entering higher education. In my opinion, it is important to continue the rhythm of pursuing formal education while we have a fresh memory and knowledge from what we have learned.

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agree with the idea of getting informal knowledge by experiencing informal education that will be beneficial for us to understand and be engaged

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real social life problems. We will be able to learn

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ways to solve problems practically, not only theoretically.

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, I believe that taking a year out between schools and starting university is not always necessary unless there is a practical reason behind it,

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as to gain work experience which is related to our future study that can support our professional background.

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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?