One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.

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Dear Ms Grimes, I am your

-door neighbour and I am writing to inform you that your daughter, Sarah, broke the front passenger window of my Chevrolet Caprice while playing softball yesterday afternoon. The car is brand new. As you know it is winter now and

this

also

aggravates the situation since I am not able to use the car. Hopefully, your homeowner's insurance will cover

this

kind of damage. Please check with them to see if it is covered. If they do not pay for it, I will get two repair estimates for you so that you can determine how you will pay for the repair. Perhaps we could meet

this

Saturday afternoon to discuss our options. In case you are not available at that time please let me know so that we would be able to make an appointment for some other time. Thank you in advance for your kind and considerate attention to the matter. Yours sincerely, Ms Green

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