A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Swati, Hope you are doing fine today, I was excited to receive a letter from you after a long time. I would say it is a good decision of yours to take a break from your hectic lifestyle and go out camping

this

summer. As am an avid camper myself, I can suggest you some spots for your trip. As am already aware that you work for a banking firm and the work-life there is stressful, so

such

occasional holidays will help you to decompress your stress and let you spend some quality time with nature.

this

is equally important for your mental health and work-life balance. One place I would suggest is the hilly mountains of

kolad

Correct your spelling

cold

that would be like 4 hours drive from your city, it is a peaceful place and it is especially for novice campers. As per my

last

experience, my personal recommendation would be to join a tour guide as they are already aware of the locality. if you travel alone you may get lost and it is not safe too as there are wild bears near the surrounding,

Also

carry a mosquito repellent and a power bank which is of uttermost importance in

such

remote places. I would love to accompany you on

this

trip, as we got a lot to catch up on. please plan for

this

trip for the 2nd week of march as I would be busy before that. will wait for your reply . Warm Regards, Sachin

Submitted by sachinsaint on Sun Dec 19 2021

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