When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

When a
student
moves to a new
school
, he or she can
face
some
problems
. I think that almost all people had to move from
one
place to another in their lives and I am not an exception. My family moved twice during my childhood. My father is an architect, so, my family had to move from
one
place to another when the old construction was over and my father was offered to develop a new project. Two major
problems
I had to
face
in a new
school
were "no
friends
" and "a huge amount of new people". In the following
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I will analyze these
problems
and make suggestions about how a
school
can help a
student
in
this
situation. The
first
difficulty I had to
face
in a new
school
was a huge amount of new people
such
as teachers and classmates, who have no idea who I am. It was easy with the teachers, I usually stayed after the class, introduced myself to him or her and asked about their curriculum.
However
, with my new
classmates
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it was a little more difficult. I had to stand up for myself a few times because
this
is the way students get to know each other.
However
, I believe that there is a better way to get to know each other. I think that schools should participate in
this
process.
For example
, they can organize some kind of welcome class, where new students will have the opportunity to meet their new classmates and introduce themselves. The
second
problem I had to
face
in a new
school
was that I had no
friends
. I could not meet my old
friends
because they were too far away and I did not have a chance to make new
friends
. Nowadays, I think it is much easier
,
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because almost every
student
has
an
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Internet access, so, he can
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with his old
friends
. Unfortunately, I did not have
such
an opportunity when I was a
student
. I believe that schools can help newcomers by helping them to merge faster with their new classes.
For example
, a
school
can attach someone to a newcomer and the
first
one
will help a new
student
to accustom himself to a new environment. In conclusion, I would like to add, that moving from
one
school
to another brings not only
problems
but
also
many benefits.
For example
, I learnt how to make new
friends
fast and how to overcome obstacles. I think that it made me stronger as a person and I am glad that I had
this
experience in my life.
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