Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture & character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or not?

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Our desire to see and judge people around us has always been a

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problematic issue in modern day’s society. Some believe that we can understand our nearby people’s

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by spending

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with them and observing their natural

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; others may disagree

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perspective and say that they can understand people’s

character

by observing how they use

clothes

. In my opinion, modern-day humankind has much more complexity and

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than before and we can’t understand them by one course of their actions. The reasons would be our complexity, our nearby social life and our

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to be complex and outlandish in their personality day by day. We have more layouts in our

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and

character

than we think. When we see I person

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glance, we see their facial expressions, their gestures and how they wear cloth; but we get closer and make a

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, we may simply find out that how they behave, is

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nothing close to how they wear

clothes

. One may wear a diplomat’s suit, but know nothing of diplomacy, so does a person who

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a t-shirt of a football player, and doesn’t even know that player or care about football and just liked the

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. Where we live and

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we socialize, can

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in a certain

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; we always see those who go in a crowd, engage

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with them, make friends, become a part of that crowd, and after a while, wear and

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like that crowd without even noticing. It is

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important

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we live. A person who lives in a city with some restricting religious rules of wearing cloth

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may have no choice other than clothing in that

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, even when they themselves don’t want to. To know one’s

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and personality or even culture, we have to spend

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with them. We may

act

differently with a stranger we saw in street and had a quick

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when we are with our own friends and family. Even in that case, the

way

we talk and

act

in front of our friends may not be suitable for a family gathering. So, it’s really hard to tell how is someone’s

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first

glance and with one quick

conversation

and we must spend

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with them. So, as we saw, in order to understand people’s

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, we have to know their social life, spend

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with them and try to dig in and figure out their complexities, and

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we may be able to understand them by their

clothes

! So

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you want to judge some stranger in street, just make sure you know

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by all means, or just walk away and don’t think of it anymore.

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