You play a team sport with some friends. Last week, a memver of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Dear David, I am sorry I haven'

written to you since the

last

week. I was waiting for you to feel better after the unfortunate accident you had

last

Saturday. I am writing

this

letter to keep updated you on the latest game which was organized in the university's playground. I have to mention that we couldn'

be a team without you and your positive perspective in games.

Hence

, the game results were disappointing, and, unfortunately, we lost in the competition. The new player who took a role on the corner didn'

familiar enough with the rules so we lost all the chances we had to get a score.

Also

, other members were scared of possible accidents and couldn'

focus well on the game.

Therefore

, we all look forward to the

games where we will beat them. I hope you will get better ASAP and join the team to reach better results. Yours, Dorna

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

7.00

Overall Band Score

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

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Use an appropriate tone

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The Closing

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