Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

The living style of people is changing day by day, to make other's impressed by their own life. Cigarettes are surprisingly very famous among the youth who is demanding their own body.
This
essay will discuss the reasons why
this
is happening and put forward several solutions for
this
issue.
First
of all, there should be a proper record of the quantity of sold tobacco and drug officers should have that record too. Identities must be checked of the person buying smokes as well as they should not be underage and one person should be served only one packet.
For example
, if a person is having more packets he/she can hypnotise kids to indulge in drugs and I have personally experienced
this
. Another warring topic is, people are suffering from cancer from the excessive consumption of tobacco. In schools, there should be a subject taught to students awareness from all kinds of drugs as
such
they should know the side effects.
For instance
, if the youngsters properly know the bad results, I personally believe that the ratio of consumption will go down. The most important is parents should strictly treat their children in these cases. To end up, everyone knows that drugs are harmful but still people are addicted, its because they have started at a very early stage of life.
Although
, if they try to avoid it now, they will face a lot of difficulties, there is an old saying that nothing is impossible, even the word impossible itself says I am possible, if we divide it.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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