You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking frined. In your letter -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

#house #-explain #-describe #-invite #friend #visit

Hi John, How are you doing? Do you know I just moved to a new

house

last

week? That explains the reason why you haven'

heard from me in a while. To be honest, I wouldn'

have moved from my former

house

however

, I couldn'

put up with the constant leakage from the bathroom tap. I have complained a lot about these issues to my landlord, but he hasn'

been able to do anything about it.

Firstly

this

new

house

is quite lovely, it has a yellow gate that you can'

miss when passing by the street.

Also

, it has a nice garden

that is

quite noticeable once you enter by the gate.

Moreover

, the

house

has its own separate garage, and it's a four-bedroom apartment, all room ensuite.

Finally

, why not come around one of these days? I will be free starting from Monday

week, I would love to have you around for a visit, that way you will be able to see some other great stuff that I have around. Do let me know if you will be able to make it, I will be expecting you. Till I hear from you again, do have a great time. Best regards, Rotimi

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