You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend.

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Dear Frank, I was so sorry to hear about your accident! I hope you're feeling a lot better today and that it's not too boring in

hospital

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. (Expresses sympathy and asks about the reader's health.) The match on Saturday was disappointing. The score was 2 all, probably because you weren't there to score that extra goal! The awful thing was that we were winning until 10 minutes before the end

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when suddenly they scored another goal. I was so shocked when I saw the ball hit the back of the net.I think the weather was to blame. It was a really wet day and the pitch was very muddy. By the end of the

game

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you could hardly see the grass and we were sliding around in the mud. Everyone was exhausted. (Mentions the weather and conditions.) Let us know when you're going home and we'll arrange for someone to bring you to watch the

game. The rest of the team send their regards and we all wish you a speedy recovery. (Finishes with good wishes.) Best wishes, Charlie

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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that school should no longer be necessary because children can get information from the Internet.

CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

Many people agree that free public transportation should be available in most major cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea?