Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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Nowadays, on the shelves of any

store

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it is possible to find a great variety of

products

for every taste. Unfortunately, some of them

contains

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lots of

sugar

, which can harm our health.

That is

why some

people

strongly believe that if

a food

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food

a portion of food

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with a lot of

sugar

costs more, consumers will choose healthier

products

over high-costed junk food. I would say I disagree with that opinion

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because

such

measures will not reduce the consumption of cakes, pastries and other

sweets

in any way.

Also

people

with health problems sometimes need available

sugar

to maintain

level

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a level

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of blood

pressure

. To start with, modern scientists equate addiction

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sweets

with alcohol and nicotine addiction.

Thus

, raising the price of

sweets

will not reduce the demand for them. The proof of

this

is profit from tobacco. Despite the increase in cigarette

prices

and more and more taxes,

people

around the world continue to buy them and smoke. So the same situation might be seen with sugary corporations – no matter how high

prices

rise,

people

will not stop

love

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, buy and

eat

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eating

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sweets

. An increase in

prices

will only lead to the fact that

people

may begin to choose cheaper, and

therefore

less

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fewer

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quality

products

. And if the goal was to make

people

healthier,

then

it seems it turned out the opposite.

Moreover

, a lot of

people

suffer from

pressure

leaps. During the day, one person can observe both incredibly high and incredibly low pressures. There are many pills to solve

this

problem,

however

, sometimes everything happens suddenly. The easiest way to raise the dropped

pressure

is to drink tea with

sugar

or eat a chocolate bar. Raising the price of

sweets

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wrong

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because in

this

case

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not all

people

will be able to afford to buy something sweet, and improve their health condition. In conclusion,

in addition

to the fact that the increase in

prices

for

sugar

-containing

products

will not bring the desired effect,

sweets

can raise

the

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blood

pressure

and in some situations help.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

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