You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter - explain why you changed jobs - describe your new job - tell him/her your other news

Dear Ramesh uncle, I hope

this

letter finds you

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radiant health and the best of spirits. As per our

last

telephonic conversation , you have told me that you will come on 25 December 2021 from Surat to Ahmedabad because you got amiable employment as per your education and experience. I want to inform you that

first

I will pick you from the railway station but now I cannot come due to on

this

day my manager arranging one prominent meeting in our office for the whole day so I feel extremely regret about that .

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I booked a taxi for you , the taxi driver pick you at 7.00 am from the railway station and drop you at my home safely. I will give my house key to my neighbour who is Ramesh Patel so please take it with him and his home number is a -701. I will join you in the evening and spend lots of time with nostalgic talks.I

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invite our some relatives ,with them you feel exceedingly comfortable. I am sure that you feel great at home and never feel bored with me. I am waiting for your presence in my life Thanks, Yours sincerely,

Trusha

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Trisha

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter - explain why you changed jobs - describe your new job - tell him/her your other news

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Nowadays most of the parents are working which lead to harmful effects on their children. What are the causes of it? what could be the result of it?

Many people love to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. do you agree or disagree?

people believe that success is due to 10 percent of talent and 90 percent hard work. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Parents often buy their children many toys. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children having a large number of toys?