Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the cost of reconstruction of the building is very expensive and some believe that demolishing the building and building the new
property
is better. I totally agree that demolishing the
property
and making it new is less expensive and you can make it as per the new requirement. In
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Firstly
, now the day's
construction
of any
property
is very expensive,
however
, renovating the old building is quite less expensive but it will not work out for the long
term
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you may have to renovate again after some time. Demolishing and building the new building is expensive but you can make your building the way you want because as time goes the new generation needs so many new things in the
house
. For ,instance kids want their own private room for study as well as adults to need their own library or personal sports room or the gym. To fully renovate is always good you can make the
house
as per your new planning and safety, because nowadays u can cover your
property
with moisture free as well as protect with the earthquake as you can make the base very strong if you
construction
the building from the beginning and can adopt the new technology and build our new home.
Secondly
, renovate the
house
if short
term
work and you cannot satisfied with your short
term
planning, because the old
house
has so many spaces but it was not utilized in old-time as well as you cannot change the root of the
house
and if you invest too much to renovate the
house
if not a good idea
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because may you will again renovate with some other changes. if might cost more. if you demolish the
house
it will be cost-effective and give you long
term
satisfaction. To conclude,
construction
of any building is very expensive nowadays, renovating the
house
is the short
term
planning,
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demolishing the
house
and
construction
the new
house
is the long
term
investment and you can use new technology and make the updated home as per the new requirement.
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