A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I know you're going on a camping holiday

this

summer for the very

first

time at the place called Luis Lake in Central North America. I know that you will definitely

going

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to enjoy camping at Luis lake. As

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I had done camping at beautiful Luis Lake back in 2019. Let me tell you about some attractive locations nearby the place where you will going to attend. To be honest, a camping holiday has several disadvantages as well.

Firstly

, as we are living in Eastern North America, our current season is winter and Central North America has summer season going on right now. So, It is going to be a massive temperature change for our body which may lead to fever, cough or any other temporary problems. Well, I'm thinking about coming on

this

camping holiday with you as I'm having a summer break at my University. Can't wait to meet you and do camping with you. Regards, Grishma

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