A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called "The book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter - describe what this book was about - explain how this book influenced you - say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I am writing

this

letter to you to express my feeling about the

book

by the name of "who moved my cheese".

First

and foremost, I would like to thank my boss who recommended reading

this

book

once I got the chance and I have read it three times already since

then

. The main ideas of the

book

were how to adapt to the change and how we can create less stress and more pleasure in our lives and works. Even though the

book

was simply built on four characters which are two mice and two little people, it gave a lot of creative thinking, an adaptation of changes in every momentum as well as lessons learnt for every single matter.

Additionally

, I would like to say that that

book

has value to all of us in order to get an idea of accepting the situations which mean our current job, family, love relationship,

moreover

, marriage life as well and be positive for the whole change process.

Last

but not least, I would strongly recommend that people must read at least once in ages and it would be time well spent. Once again, really appreciate getting a chance to express my deepest pleasure. Yours faithfully, Honey Linn

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