Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding

voluntary

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opportunities that have been published in the local newspapers on Friday. My mum has passed

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away

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way

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last

week at your hospital and l was amused about your responsibilities and sacrifices while you were looking after her, which encouraged me to participate in voluntary tasks for the community. As I have a fixed income source;

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, money is not critical for me. Types of employment, I do not have any medical training, which I am planning to participate in online.

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, I can read books for

aged-people

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or young children

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can tell stories

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or can assist patients to do light exercise. About availability, my schedule is quite open in the mornings as most of my duties, that generate income, are in the afternoons’ session,

although

I can switch my job schedule in case it is required. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith

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