Cycling is a healthier and more environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

More and more

people

are increasingly using cars to travel, even though cycling is friendly to the environment and health. Safety is the most important reason for less cycling.

This

essay will elucidate the reason for

this

trend with the solution to tackle

this

issue and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.

To begin

with, the most important reason is that there is less security to cycling on the track, having said

this

because more and more

people

are likely to break the law

as a result

street safety is reduced for cyclists.

For example

, according to the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it has been revealed that 80% of

people

who are living in urban areas choose to use the car or other public transport

such

as buses, train because they are concerned about road safety which makes them feel less secure when they are cycling in the city. To solve

this

problem, the government should tackle

this

problem as soon as possible by improving the traffic law and reconstructing the transportation in the country.

For instance

, the main construction of the road in Thailand has no cycling paths, so it can be the cause of accidents easier.

Therefore

firstly

, the government should build the cycling lens.

Secondly

, they should launch a campaign which persuades the community to use cycling to communicate

furthermore

they should examine the benefits of using cycling

instead

of cars

such

as environmental, health and less costly.

This

is a quite big change which needs to take time in order to overcome

this

issue and

also

this

needs the cooperation of all the population and all organisations to make

this

happen. In conclusion, making cycling more popular should have good management in order to gain more confidence of

people

to use cycling by the government, in terms of road infrastructure, law and other facilities

such

as parking areas for a bicycle.

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