You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam I have recently completed a culinary program from your renowned institute three weeks ago. The

course

taught me to make delicious egg dishes and some

Italian

desserts as well.

However

, I enjoyed making

Italian

desserts with cream and caramel and yummy fruit cake. After taking

this

cookery program, I must say my cooking skills improved drastically. I made a typical

Italian

dessert at my friend's birthday party. Though It's been just one week to complete

this

cookery

course

, the dessert was delicious. My friends like my dessert so much that I was so overwhelmed by them. Since I did take a cooking class on

Italian

desserts, I want to suggest another cooking

course

on Mexican food as well and a module on how to chop meat fast and bake chocolate cakes with an oven. Thank you for conducting

such

a useful cookery

course

. Yours Faithfully, Grishma Patel

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