You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam I have recently completed a culinary program from your renowned institute three weeks ago. The
course
taught me to make delicious egg dishes and some
Italian
desserts as well.
However
, I enjoyed making
Italian
desserts with cream and caramel and yummy fruit cake. After taking
this
cookery program, I must say my cooking skills improved drastically. I made a typical
Italian
dessert at my friend's birthday party. Though It's been just one week to complete
this
cookery
course
, the dessert was delicious. My friends like my dessert so much that I was so overwhelmed by them. Since I did take a cooking class on
Italian
desserts, I want to suggest another cooking
course
on Mexican food as well and a module on how to chop meat fast and bake chocolate cakes with an oven. Thank you for conducting
such
a useful cookery
course
. Yours Faithfully, Grishma Patel
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