You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell him which team won • Describe the weather conditions that day • Say how you felt about the match

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Dear Stephen, I’m writing to you regarding the game result that you

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injured when the cricket ball struck

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your forehead. Our opponent won the contest by seven runs, and we could not return to the clash after you left the field towards the hospital.

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, Lily grabbed 5 wickets, which was not sufficient to dominate the game though, I suppose. The weather condition was in our favour as it was overcast and windy, which assist our quick bowlers, especially Lily, to swing the ball;

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the field.

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, our team lost the match, which hurt due to the close contest. I’m still recovering from the loss as we could not win the tournament after

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hard work.

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, for the

season, we must search for our sponsor for

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season to recover our regular expenses and experienced fielding coach as our team is well-known to the opponent for poor fielding. All the best! Ryan Smith

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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell him which team won • Describe the weather conditions that day • Say how you felt about the match

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

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