The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two pie charts describe the comparison of predictions for global production by
division
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the division
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between 2040 and 2060. As an
overall
trend, there will be a most dominant section
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service and a tiny number
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agriculture and materials. Units are measured by percentage. First of all, we can see that the
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of
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charts
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slightly different. There will be 40% in the service sector in 2040,
meanwhile
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in
2060
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it will be 41%. Almost the same as with manufacturing, just a 2% difference which is in 2040 at 31% and in 2060 at 33%.
Furthermore
, the sector of info-com tech has a small portion around 15% in 2040 and after that thoroughly
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% in 2060. Afterwards, pie charts have the lowest three digits below 10%. In the energy sector just
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percent
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difference.
On the other hand
, in 2040 the lowest number will be at materials which
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3%,
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in 2060 the lowest at agriculture which is 1%. Materials through
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the rise
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and opposed to agriculture will decline.
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