Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?

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We live in an era where ignoring social media isn't an easy thing to do. Everything and everyone around us is connected to these

sites

Facebook

, Instagram and Twitter.

This

being the case starting from a piece of news, to know what is trending to be part of and to be aware of it requires social media.

Facebook

, by the time it was started, was more of a place where the public shared their opinions, interests, lifestyle and even their day to day happenings. The contents and videos shared by the various communities across the world, interest and engulf an individual into the world of

Facebook

. From being a place that was used to share common interests which helped

individuals

connect globally, to be pushed under peer pressure,

Facebook

has shown every face of it to us. To start off with the positives, it was

one

of its kind when it surfaced and it let

individuals

express everything, letting them connect across boundaries. If you're a creator

then

there is no better place for you to be in, than

Facebook

. Understanding the growth of

Facebook

and

society

's craze towards the medium, let advertisers take advantage. From being a creator's heaven to being an advertisers paradise

Facebook

has paved the way for every industry,

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everything became easy under a fingertip and under

one

name, from shopping to trading, movies to sports every industry understood the importance of

Facebook

and invested in it in all ways. They sure did reap benefits. But

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only benefits? No. The negative impact

Facebook

has had on both

individuals

and

society

is quite enormous. The medium that was

initially

used to express yourself, started to put everyone under peer pressure. Things were simple when

Facebook

was all about expressing, but the peer pressure to be under the radar of having more likes and shares took a notch on every individual. To add to

society

's misery the social networking site brought a feature with reactions, only to let the public be more expressive. But, the hatred and the negative comments

one

had to go through in these

sites

when they express themself is bizarre. When it comes to

such

social networking

sites

, there is no right and no wrong. Every Jack, Jill and Harry have their say.

Facebook

takes a toll on

one

's mental health

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when they fail to deliver as an individual or in the form of an organization. The need to be a part of it has only led to the fall of

society

. The addictive nature and the ease at which industries can target

individuals

are the major security concerns for an individual and for

society

. To conclude, there are stars that

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Facebook

has identified and has given to the world. It has

also

ripped

one

's identity and their true nature. It definitely has its own share of positives and negatives, but at a point or there it is necessary that

one

should be sane enough to choose which side they are going to be. End of the day it is all about maintaining your mental wellness and being sane. In

this

social media eras, you either die as a hero or live long enough to see yourself become a villain. There is no in-between.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?

Fully explain your ideas

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