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The given table provides information about the carbon dioxide emissions in 5 countries, namely China,
USA
, Russia, India and
Japan
, in the Year 2006. Overall, it appears that, while each American released about 5 times as much CO2 as a China's resident, both countries were the highest ones in total CO2 productions among all.
In contrast
, India has the lowest CO2 emission per person and the total figure was the most Conservative for
Japan
.
Additionally
, all areas had shown rising trends, with the noticeable exception of the
USA
, which had a downward trajectory. In terms of amounts of the CO2 emissions per individual,
USA
was the
first
country by 19.8
million
tonnes
. Russia was the
second
one by approximately an 8
million
margin. Regarding
Japan
,
this
country had emitted half of that of the
USA
.
Finally
, each Chinese had accounted for 4.6
million
tonnes
and India ,with 1.4
million
,
tonnes
had the lowest amounts of CO2 per resident. Looking specifically at total
tonnes
and changes from 2005 to 2006,
although
the
USA
had the highest some (5487
tonnes
) in 2005, it was reduced by 2%, reached 5540
tonnes
.
However
, the
second
Close region, China, had increased significantly (11)% and surpassed the
USA
, made up 5900
tonnes
in 2006.
Moreover
, having a 1.1% surge,
Japan
was the most conservative region in total CO2 production during the one-year period, standing around 1200
million
tonnes
.
Although
Russia joined the similar upward trend,
this
area by 0.6% had seen the least variations over the said period.
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