Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

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Undoubtedly, transportation has become

integral

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part of urban

cities

However

traffic

jams and prolonged

travel

time

is becoming common these days. Increased number of

vehicles

and poor

infrastructure

could be the main root causes

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this

problem. In

this

essay, both these issues will be discussed in detail.

Firstly

, more and more new

vehicles

are being added to

town's

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the town's

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traffic

due to

increase

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an increase

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in sales of

four-wheeler

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a four-wheeler

the four-wheeler

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and

two wheeler

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two-wheeler

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companies, which has indeed increased the

traffic

jams. Now can

restriction

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restrictions

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be imposed to

travel

public

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the public

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? No,

this

can be done, but at least we can create

time

zones in congested areas of

cities

for

movement

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the movement

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of heavy-commercial

vehicles

. For an instance, in Delhi,

traffic

jams are quite common due to which

administration

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the administration

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has stopped the movement of load-carry

vehicles

to pass through

city

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the city

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after 7 a.m. and before 11 p.m.

This

has eased the pressure on

traffic

within the city.

Hence

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apply

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stopping the large

vehicles

for

certain

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a certain

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time

period tends to curb the issue of long

travel

time

within the

cities

which has become common due to

increasing

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the increasing

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number of

vehicles

road

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the road

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day by day.

Secondly

, poor

road

infrastructure

has led to delay during

travel

. Narrow and broken roads handling

traffic

movement more than

its

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their

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capacity are common these days.

Moreover

, if parking facilities are limited, people are bound to park their

vehicles

on sides of

road

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the road

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which is causing

major

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the major

a major

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issue of

traffic

cities

Road

to airport in Jaipur city perfectly exemplifies

this

scenario where

this

old bitumen

road

had developed cracks and it was not wide enough to absorb the

traffic

. Due to increasing people's complaints

last

year new cemented

road

and exclusive parking building were built and

new

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the new

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road

is wide enough to solve the problem of unnecessary delays.

Therefore

infrastructure

is the key factor

which

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that

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decides whether one faces

travel

issues or not. To conclude, ever-increasing

vehicles

road

and poor

infrastructure

has

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have

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created

devastating

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a devastating

the devastating

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effect on

traffic

issues.

Therefore

solution

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the solution

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lies in

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the

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amendment of

traffic

rules and

construction

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the construction

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healthy

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health

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infrastructure

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