You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention to the central AC system which was not working properly during my stay.

Last

month I stayed in your hotel for a week and I placed a special request for a room with

the

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sea view. The room was indeed nice with a

beutiful

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beautiful

view outside.

Nevertheless

, I am really disappointed with your cooling system being in a

5 star

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hotel. My entire stay had been spoiled due to the hot weather which was quite

unexcpected

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unexpected

the

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apply

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January month.

Moreover

, your cooling

sytem

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system

was not helping me to get over the problem. The vent sound feels like it is working but it was not making the room cool. I tried to ask your team but for some

reason

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they

couldnt

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couldn't

repair it. Since I paid in advance and

couldnt

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couldn't

move anywhere else, I had to buy a table fan for the time being as they

couldnt

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couldn't

provide me

the

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one. I would like you to check with your maintenance team and keep it working

the

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whole

years

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regardless

which

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season it is. I hope my feedback helps

improving

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your services. Thank You. Yours faithfully,

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

Desai

Submitted by brijal_desai on Tue Oct 26 2021

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