Today, TV channels show more men’s sports than women’s sports. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

These days, there is a significant difference between
men
and
women
’s
sports
coverage
on
television
. I believe that
women
’s sport should get just as much
coverage
as
men
’s, and will outline my reasons in the following essay.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for the dominance of
men
sports
programs on
television
. Due to a large proportion of
sports
viewers being male,
television
channels tend to broadcast m
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sports
programs to maximize their ratings and profits. Take football as an example. Inside a coffee shop, it is common to see a group of young
men
discussing a recent
men
’s football match, while
women
show a greater preference for discussing other topics like shopping or celebrity gossip.
Additionally
, because
men
are usually physically m
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tronger and faster than
women
, they tend to play at a much higher level, which makes
men
’s
sports
much more exciting to watch.
However
, I am of the opinion that it is necessary for
television
channels to provide equal
sports
coverage
o
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both genders.
Firstly
, it helps to create gender equality in society(5) and increases the participation rate of
women
in sport. Every time
women
go out onto the field, they give it their all knowing that their best will likely go unnoticed, and
therefore
just like
men
, female athletes should receive full recognition(6) for their effort.
Secondly
, better media
coverage
also
enables
women
to make money from endorsements which i
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their income.
That is
to say, more
television
exposure for t
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emale players will lead to major deals with endorsers and higher salaries in the future through advertising contracts. In conclusion, why
women
’s
sports
shows do not receive enough
coverage
in
this
day and age results from the aforementioned reasons, and I truly believe that it is necessary to ensure equal
coverage
of
women
’s
sports
.
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