You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

#house #friend #visit #addresses

Dear Paul, Hope you’re doing well and it’s been a long time since we had a discussion with each other.I am writing to inform you regarding that I have moved to a new place in the Newyorkshire residential area as

this

place is quite near to my workplace.

To begin

with,the house in which I moved is about 3 bedroom set with an attached bathroom with all bedrooms.

Additionally

, it’s

also

having a kitchen garden and a lawn.

This

residential complex is newly built and is equipped with all the modern facilities.

Further

this

accommodation is only about 15 minutes drive from your home .

Further

, more ,importantly I want that should make some plans and visit me during the weekend. We'll get some quality time to spend together and I remember it’s the

last

time when we met during your graduation.I hope you'll make some plans and we'll catch up soon. Warm regards, Jagjit

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 8.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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