You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

Dear Paul, Hope you’re doing well and it’s been a long time since we had a discussion with each other.I am writing to inform you regarding that I have moved to a new place in the Newyorkshire residential area as
this
place is quite near to my workplace.
To begin
with,the house in which I moved is about 3 bedroom set with an attached bathroom with all bedrooms.
Additionally
, it’s
also
having a kitchen garden and a lawn.
This
residential complex is newly built and is equipped with all the modern facilities.
Further
,
this
accommodation is only about 15 minutes drive from your home .
Further
, more ,importantly I want that should make some plans and visit me during the weekend. We'll get some quality time to spend together and I remember it’s the
last
time when we met during your graduation.I hope you'll make some plans and we'll catch up soon. Warm regards, Jagjit
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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