We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish. What are the causes and what are your solutions?

#society #environment #rubbish

We are currently in the age of total consumption which is

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resulting

in spreading

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of rubbish all over the land and oceans. Diversity of approaches towards the Earth's state and distinct lack of recycling factories that surely cause the problem

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may be

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a good foundation to cope with the global waste difficulties. It is true that

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over

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the amount of the environmental challenges drastically increased and brought

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. We can certainly blame someone,

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, it might be a good option to emphasize

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diversity of opinions on dealing methods with it and ,equally important, endemic shortage of points that can empty and recycle huge tons of junk that fills the landfills.

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, if the one was asked about how to resolve

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complication, we probably would get a typical answer or indifferent silence in response.

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, the lion's share of the population simply is not ready to have something to do with it, assuming themselves somewhere out of the global situation.

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amount

opportunties

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opportunities

to call a halt to

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issue, we experience

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recycle

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centers

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all over the world, even in the countries of the 1st word. Proper ways to deal with it would be

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proper marketing targetting on changing and shaping public's mind in

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way by conclusive advertisements and

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collaborations

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with strong public role models.

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way, there would be high chances to get involved more and more people in order to solve the issue. Another proposal is to increase

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and efficiency of

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places.

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high percentages of recycled rubbish

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not only contribute to

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in nature, but it

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can prevent natural resources from depletion. To conclude with, having some groups indifferent towards junk spread and inadequate forces to clean all up can be solved by acts of television and public figures as well as increases in

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points.

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