A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . suggest an interesting parts of the city to live in . describe the public transport in your city . say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear David, It is exciting news for me, you will be moving to Melbourne for your work and congratulation to my buddy. Melbourne is a beautiful city in Australia. You are very lucky to move here because you could see a lot of interesting locations
such
as the national gallery of Victoria is an International art museum, Queen victoria market. These are the most popular and interesting locations in
this
city. We could be seen when we arrive here. Probably your work in a city centre, you can take the public transport here
such
as bus and metro train. If you will get an Oyster card, you will not buy tickets, again and again, to travel on public transport. Early morning and evening time traffic is a peak on the road. Certainly, I will introduce my friends to you and you will make friends at your workplace too. I am really waiting for your arrival, if you do not mind, you will come as fast as possible. Anyway, I cannot wait to see you. Lots of love, Luna.
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