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In most countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more available. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In today’s modern society,
junk
food
 is becoming
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the favorite
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favorite
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food
 of young adults in over the world because of its lower price and great taste.
Although
this
 trend can offer some advantages. the drawbacks may be far more significant. On the one hand, there can be some minor benefits of
junk
food
’s cheaper price. One possible advantage is that
people
 can save a
lot
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 money on buying and cooking
food
.
As a result
, there are many youngsters who spend lots of time on working or learning prefer eating
junk
food
 than healthy
food
. Another beneficial effect could be that it is convenient for
people
 to buy because
fast
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fast-food
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food
 restaurants were located
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everywhere
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every where
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everywhere
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.
Nevertheless
, the fact that the decreasing in
price
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 of fast
food
 can have major downsides which overshadow these positive impacts. The most obvious issue could be that Eating
junk
food
in
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 a long time can make
people
 may suffer from overweight, obesity and other health problems. There are several reasons why consume fast
food
 can lead to these problems.
First
, fast
food
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does
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dose
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not
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 contain some necessary nutrients which are essential for health,
in
addition
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 fast
food
 is cooked without proper hygiene standards.
Thus
,
people
 should choose healthy
food
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instead
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in stead
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instead
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 of
junk
food
.
Last
 but not least, the number of
fast
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fast-food
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food
 consumers is rising day by day at an alarming rate.
Therefore
, that poses a serious risk to the culture and customs
about
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 traditional
food
 in most countries in the world. In conclusion, despite the potential benefits of
junk
food
 is being cheaper and available. they pale in comparison to the drawbacks involved.
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