News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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The decision of what to present on TV comes from the

bussines

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business

owner. There are many factors that

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what we see on the

news

. One of them is the

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frequency

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frequence

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the audience

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consume

a particular subject. As we see an

increasing

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of negativity informed, it seems

this

has been people's preference.

Firstly

, how often people watch or read

specifc

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specific

news

can be easily

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measured

by television

emisors

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emissions

and the number of

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the newspaper

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newspaper

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sold. With

this

information

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editors can define what to show.

For example

, the

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of bad

news

on TV probably indicates that people get more excited about bad

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news

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, so

this

is the

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choice

editors decide to present. But

this

is not human fault. The

news

showed are

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sensationalist

, and everyone's attention is

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cached

catched

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from drama.

However

, It would be healthier if plesant content was posted. If,

for example

news

about how many women reached the manager position in some famous company would encourage more girls to follow the same path.

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news

would

also

bring us more hope for the world. The editors would need to make the same effort they do when talking about bad

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though. In conclusion, the most consumed

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content

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contend

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content

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will define what the

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business

will give to us. We

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definitely

get used to negative

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although

the opposite makes us feel happy.

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