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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1908 and 2000.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1908 and 2000.
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The pie charts compare how
much
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electricity
units
 were generated in Australia and France in 1980 and 200 by five different fuel sources (Coal, Oil, Natural Gas, Hydro
Power
 and Nuclear
Power
)
Overall
, total output significantly raised in both countries during
this
 20-year period.
While
 differences in production
was
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 never more than 10
units
 between countries, Australia escalated its production from 100
units
 to 170
units
.
Similarly
, France doubled the
amount
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number
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 of
electricity
units
 to 180.
Australian
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Australia
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 never burnt nuclear
power
.
In contrast
, coal always was the main source of
power
 for them. Coal provided 50
units
 of
electricity
 in 1980 with
a
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dramatic growth to 130
units
 in 2000.
Although
electricity
 based on
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 increased from 20
units
 to 36
units
, natural gas and oil-based
electricity
 dropped to 2
units
form
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from
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 10 and 20
units
 respectively. In
France
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,France
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electricity
 generation using nuclear
power
 jumped from 15 to 126
units
.
Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
 and natural gas only made 2
units
 of
electricity
 in 2000,
while
 they supplied 5 and 25
units
 of energy in 1980 respectively. Coal and oil did not experience remarkable change and their output remained
about
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at about
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 25
units
 of
electicity
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electricity
.
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