Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that international news as one of the school subjects. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It was suggested by some people, that global
news
should be added to the secondary school programme as one of the subjects, others argue that studying
news
during some classes is enough. In my opinion, that some the international
news
could be beneficial to read and study for children, both in academic and practical use. In
this
, case teachers have to educate their students to carefully choose what to read and critically judge data from the press.
Firstly
, understanding relevant global issues are very important for critical thinking and general vision.
For example
,
such
topics as climate change, social and political researches, scientific breakthroughs can add valuable knowledge for a basic school programme. Many scientific, environmental magazines are actually very popular among teenage literature in my county.
Moreover
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I think that elder children tend to be more interested in politics and social problems, as there are a rise in the number of young activists and politicians in recent years across the globe.
In addition
, I think that students should read and research
this
information voluntarily because
this
will motivate them more rather than obligated tasks with exercise, tests and rating. As an alternative, in secondary schools teachers could tasking students to present a relevant topic from international
news
to profound their knowledge and create a habit of researching that will help them in
further
education.
However
fake or one-sided
news
is more and more common nowadays,
therefore
teachers have to navigate youngers how to receive and analyse data from the press, both from local and international
news
.
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